Personally...

I would not change it or rewrite it- there's nothing to add or take away. I've been a fan of all your work with a ton of your songs on my favorites. What's to change? I wouldn't want anyone to butcher this.

Lovely

This is an excellent work of art! Simple and beautiful like it should. Please keep up the awesome work.

[[Oh and as for Zefy ignore him and his bull, I've read the reviews and I agree with everyone else so far- they're useless.]]

Screw 0 Bombers

I am getting real tired of Zefy's shitty and useless reviews. You're no music genius.

As for this song one of the main purposes for Newgrounds is to post experimental stuff so folks can review and help artists out ffs.

For the actual review- short, simple, it's like a generic theme for whatever you like. The quality is a little poor and it's repetitive, but otherwise it's not bad at all. Come up with a direction you want this music to go (what should it represent) in and it'll be awesome!

[[Oh, and ignore Zefy and his shitty taste and elitist bullcrap.]]